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EastTXFarmgirl
True Blue Farmgirl
731 Posts
Victoria
Farmgirl #549
TX
USA
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 Posted - Apr 22 2013 : 2:18:41 PM
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I need a better "punch line" on my business card and hoped y'all could help me out. As the card is now:
Victoria's Cottage Bakery
Specialty Cakes For All Occasions
Homemade Goodness With Professional Design (this is the line I really don't care for but I can't think of any other way to put it.)
I want to convey that the product is homemade and taste good but the appearance is very professional. Many of you know that some people think homemade and their mind automatically goes to a less than professional appearance. A home business is hard enough anywhere but it seems in East Texas you really have to prove yourself. So if there are any ideas out there I would love to hear them.
And don't forget to visit me at:
www.facebook.com/victoriascottagebakery
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msdoolittle
True Blue Farmgirl
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Amanda
East Texas
USA
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Posted - Apr 24 2013 : 12:20:31 PM
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I'm thinking hard on this one! Yes, E. Tex can be tough, can't it? On your FB page, you describe your sunflower wedding cake as "country elegance", so that got me to thinking about 'elegant'...
Maybe: "Elegant design with a Homemade touch" or "Divine homemade goodness",
"Divine Design and Homemade Goodness" "Divine Design meets Homemade Taste"
"Divine Design Meets Homemade Goodness"
"Refined Design With A Homemade Touch" "Sublime (or Sophisticated) Sweets with a Homemade Touch"
Just brainstorming while reading a thesaurus. Lol
FarmGirl #1390
www.mylittlecountry.wordpress.com |
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msdoolittle
True Blue Farmgirl
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Amanda
East Texas
USA
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MagnoliaWhisper
True Blue Farmgirl
2817 Posts
Heather
Haysville
Kansas
USA
2817 Posts |
Posted - Apr 24 2013 : 2:03:54 PM
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Grandma's recipes, with modern elegant presentation.
Old fashioned flavor, with modern elegant presentation.
Home baked taste, with up to date elegant presentation.
you could use current or fresh in place of modern as well.
http://www.heathersprairie.blogspot.com |
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MagnoliaWhisper
True Blue Farmgirl
2817 Posts
Heather
Haysville
Kansas
USA
2817 Posts |
Posted - Apr 24 2013 : 2:04:58 PM
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PS I have to tell you I would rather have a ugly cake then a lot of these cakes at the shops any more, they taste AWFUL! I couldn't choke them down! You're cakes are beautiful. People who don't like "homemade" have something wrong with their taste buds!
http://www.heathersprairie.blogspot.com |
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Marybeth
True Blue Farmgirl
6418 Posts
Mary Beth
Stanwood
Wa 98292
USA
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Posted - Apr 24 2013 : 4:00:57 PM
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Modernn/elegant with that homemade flavor
Dazzle your Taste Buds with Homemade Elegance
Profession Pride and Homemade Elegance
Professional Elegance with Homemade Pride
http://www.smallcityscenes.blogspot.com
www.day4plus.blogspot.com
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EastTXFarmgirl
True Blue Farmgirl
731 Posts
Victoria
Farmgirl #549
TX
USA
731 Posts |
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EastTXFarmgirl
True Blue Farmgirl
731 Posts
Victoria
Farmgirl #549
TX
USA
731 Posts |
Posted - Apr 27 2013 : 8:40:03 PM
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Amanda how have you been didn't we barter soap for bottles last year. Heather I could not agree more. I have tasted some pretty bad wedding cakes in my time. I have really worked on my frosting recipe and will say it is pretty darn good. But I think the real key is the amount of frosting too much of even a good thing can be bad. I use as little as possible. I have never seen anyone scrape off any of my frosting. How many times have you taken a bite of cake and ended up raking 90 percent of the frosting off? My sister's wedding cake had about 2 inches of frosting it was horrible. (That was before I started decorating)
www.facebook.com/victoriascottagebakery
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Ninibini
True Blue Farmgirl
7577 Posts
Nini
Pennsylvania
USA
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Posted - Apr 27 2013 : 9:37:30 PM
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Professionally homemade... Elegant AND delicious!
Farmgirl Sister #1974
God gave us two hands... one to help ourselves, and one to help others!
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EastTXFarmgirl
True Blue Farmgirl
731 Posts
Victoria
Farmgirl #549
TX
USA
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msdoolittle
True Blue Farmgirl
1143 Posts
Amanda
East Texas
USA
1143 Posts |
Posted - Apr 29 2013 : 10:28:41 AM
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Hi, Victoria! Yes, we sure did! I thought about you a while back because I had some more little bottles lying around. :0)
And, I totally agree about funky frosting! I like the homemade whipped and plain ol' buttercream myself. I hate the kind that tastes like straight up shortening and sugar. Blech!
FarmGirl #1390
www.mylittlecountry.wordpress.com |
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Ninibini
True Blue Farmgirl
7577 Posts
Nini
Pennsylvania
USA
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Posted - Apr 29 2013 : 11:50:59 AM
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Awesome, Victoria! :) Best of luck to you! :) Hugs - Nini
Farmgirl Sister #1974
God gave us two hands... one to help ourselves, and one to help others!
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MagnoliaWhisper
True Blue Farmgirl
2817 Posts
Heather
Haysville
Kansas
USA
2817 Posts |
Posted - Apr 29 2013 : 12:33:58 PM
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I think Nini's is perfect as well! I wanted to say that last night when I seen it but I didn't have enough hands to type (nursing toddler! lol).
http://www.heathersprairie.blogspot.com |
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jpbluesky
True Blue Farmgirl
6066 Posts
Jeannie
Florida
USA
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Posted - May 05 2013 : 05:54:32 AM
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I like the home-made goodness phrase:
Home-made goodness baked with great taste. (play on words) :)
Farmgirl #31
www.blueskyjeannie.blogspot.com
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