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countrified_city_gurl
Farmgirl in Training

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najia
heidelberg
Germany
27 Posts

Posted - Nov 11 2010 :  11:33:58 AM  Show Profile
Stairwell housing is killing me. I hate not living out in the open an cannot wait for us to receive a new duty station. In the mean time, I wrote a bad poem that sums up my feelings. Like ta hear it? Here it goes..!!


Untitled by NES

Rolling hills alive with green-
Crisp autumn air, clear and pristine-
Trees of life, branches towering high-
Their golden leaves turned towards the sky.
These are the sights that sustain me.
The thoughts and dreams that help maintain me-
Through the crowded cities and narrow streets-
Through unending lines and rhythm n’ beats-
In a world I can no longer keep tempo to.


Najia, the countrified city girl! #2221

Maybe a person's time would be as well spent raising food as raising money to buy food. ~Frank A. Clark


Fiddlehead Farm
True Blue Farmgirl

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Diane
Waupaca WI
USA
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Posted - Nov 11 2010 :  2:54:36 PM  Show Profile
Najia, I don't think that poem is bad at all. I am sorry that you are feeling that way.

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I get up every morning determined to both change the world and have one hell of a good time. Sometimes this makes planning my day difficult.
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clothedinscarlet
True Blue Farmgirl

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Siobhan
Battle Creek MI
USA
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Posted - Nov 11 2010 :  7:01:15 PM  Show Profile
Nope. Not bad at all. I can feel your desire to break free from the city and run to the things that really call to you :)

I like your quote, BTW!

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Siobhan - AKA Liza-Jane (my farmgirl name), wife to my best friend, Trent, and mommy to Camden (11/28/05) and Bennett (7/11/07). and Truman (7/28/09)
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countrified_city_gurl
Farmgirl in Training

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najia
heidelberg
Germany
27 Posts

Posted - Nov 14 2010 :  03:31:46 AM  Show Profile
Aww, thanks ladies. lol

Najia, the countrified city girl! #2221

Maybe a person's time would be as well spent raising food as raising money to buy food. ~Frank A. Clark


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