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| Muttley |
Posted - May 01 2006 : 2:45:11 PM Hey there gals! I just wrote this poem last month, and thought hey! I should put it on the forum, and see what everyone thinks! So here it is:
April 2006
It’s been so long Where did I go wrong I walked away Why didn’t I stay
Why did you wait for me What was it you saw in me You showed me more love More grace than a dove
You are my Lord Yet how can I afford The Love you have shown me What can my re-payment be
You are the one who died for me The one who cared about all of me You left your life behind For my heart and mind
You are all I need You’re the gardener and I’m the Seed Help me follow your way Every night and Every Day
-Heather Caluya
"What's in a name? That which we call a rose By any other word would smell as sweet." -Shakespeare |
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| Sunshine Farmgirl |
Posted - May 17 2006 : 08:09:03 AM I just love poetry, it speaks form the heart. Thanks for sharing. Wendy
"they say I've lost my mind....I think I've finally found it" |
| Aunt Jenny |
Posted - May 02 2006 : 8:26:15 PM YOu have a way with words Heather...very nice!
Jenny in Utah Inside me there is a skinny woman crying to get out...but I can usually shut her up with cookies http://www.auntjennysworld.blogspot.com/ visit my little online shop at www.auntjenny.etsy.com |
| cajungal |
Posted - May 02 2006 : 5:02:03 PM Just beautiful! It is so comforting and satisfying to write poetry and stories. Keep it up!! Thank you very much for sharing this intimate part of yourself with us.
I know that we are not to add anything to God's Word.....but you could call your collection of poems "Heather's Psalms"
Blessings Catherine
One of the best compliments from one of my daughters: "Moma, you smell good...like dirt." |
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Posted - May 02 2006 : 2:36:59 PM Good job Heather. It's nice to see your posts and the replys you receive. It put's a smile on my heart.
When I feel spring coming I have to plant or I’ll go crazy! |
| Mumof3 |
Posted - May 02 2006 : 06:49:35 AM Heather, What a wonderful insight into who you are. Thank you for sharing.  Karin |
| Libbie |
Posted - May 02 2006 : 06:30:35 AM That's just lovely, Heather. Thanks for sharing it.
XOXO, Libbie
"Nothing is worth more than this day." - Goethe |